My opportunity is having something that is affordable, for both genders, and able to keep you insulated when its cold (no matter the temperature), and cool when its hot outside. My solution is the ULTIjack, perfect for anyone spending their days inside or outside. The ultimate jacket for all weather.
Wednesday, February 3, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 1
My opportunity is having something that is affordable, for both genders, and able to keep you insulated when its cold (no matter the temperature), and cool when its hot outside. My solution is the ULTIjack, perfect for anyone spending their days inside or outside. The ultimate jacket for all weather.
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Dear Cristal,
ReplyDeleteI really like the concept. Your energy and passion were also bursting through the screen. Based on the instructions for the elevator pitch, you didn't have a hook in the beginning (i.e. no story, statistic); you jumped right to the problem and solution. Additionally, you didn't say anything about the ULTIjack. For example, how it works? What it's made of? What it looks like? Moreover, you clearly have time to do this because your pitch was only 30 out of a possible 60 seconds. Lastly, you should have an ask at the end. I would recommend taking a look at the example elevator pitches, instruction videos, and elevator pitch PowerPoint Dr. Pryor shared. You are on to a very interesting idea that calls for more development. Take a look at my elevator pitch here http://taleemreflections.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html. Thank you.
Farrukh
Hi Cristal. I really love your enthusiasm in this video. You definitely followed all the rules and even dressed the part. I find the concept of your idea interesting. I know there are some things that exist now like jackets (wind breakers) that have a similar intention, but it sounds like you are taking it to the next level. Great job and keep up the work. When you get the chance check out my blog http://theentrepreneuriaou.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no1-start-of-cycleops.html
ReplyDeleteHey Cristal, I really liked your pitch! You definitely had the enthusiasm and confidence necessary to get your idea across. I also like the idea you had for your pitch- this definitely sounded like a product I would be interested in. I would just make your pitch a little longer with more description of the business side of things, such as a general idea of cost or more description of the jacket itself. Overall you did a great job! Here's my post: http://nicmcq.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
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