The feedback that stood out to me the most was the technology behind my product. I never really thought of putting what generates my jacket into words. It it very complicated and challenging but possible.
Ive changed how to describe my product. I am more confident in describing what powers the ULTIjack and can help customers better understand my product.
Cristal, I enjoyed your pitch for the ULTIjack this time around, but it brought up some unanswered questions for me. This is the first time you talk about the jacket needing to "regenerate", "charge up", or "detect" weather, rather than the material helping to regulate your temperature. Also, it seems that the technology and research and development will be very expensive and you will need to charge a premium price for the jacket to recoup these investments, you may not be able to initially offer it as an affordable product to everyone. I look forward to the development of your concept and to understanding how the product works from your future assignments.
ReplyDeleteWow Cristal! Your pitch was so interesting. You seem very confident about your ideas and I love that. I love your idea about creating a jacket that will be easy for everyone to wear! Just one question---this jacket might look bulky! Do you plan to incorporate nice designs? Other than that, great job! Here's a link to my post: http://jeromerimpos.blogspot.com/2016/02/campus-shuttle-elevator-pitch-2.html
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your business proposal and I believe that you have a unique idea that could be used by everyone. However, I recommend you to focus on a specific market given the fact that your idea could be a victim of looking for such a wide market. You can segment and target your market into different and specific products for different sectors of the society. Remember what professor Pryor showed us about Footlocker that could be helpful. All in all, I believe you did a great job! Keep it up with the good work!
Please take a look to my pots and let me know what you think about it.
Here is the link: http://alejandroentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/02/the-gator-spotter-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Very cool idea. Sounds like something out of science fiction. I would be interested to see how you would be able to make this product affordable considering the amount of research and development needed to make it a reality. Check out my pot here http://gainerent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/the-feedback-i-got-was-to-be-little.html
ReplyDeleteI really love the creativity factor of this proposal. I think that something like this could use a lot of testing and design research. Your video presence is great and you seem confident and excited about your idea. I also agree with some of the comments above stating that you should target your ideal market, who are your potential customers? Great job, feel free to check out my post, http://jessjohns1.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html
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